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What an amazing project. These would look awesome on a larger scale in a gallery setting.

I don't see this project done that often on this scale. However, I'm glad you did it and you did it well.

Each image is exposed perfectly. Everyone fills roughly the same amount of space in each frame. I think it would work better if you had the text on the side read left to right in a horizontal format, or up and down in a vertical format. Also, the "grimace" face looks a bit exaggerated in most of the models. Maybe you could take it out completely? Or, if you redo this project, get people you know and trust to fulfill your requests better.

In all, a wonderful and interesting project!
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denkyo Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2010  Student Photographer
thank you so much for taking the time to write this thought-out critique! :)

I realize that the themes could be better, and if I had the time, I'd love to redo it with other models. Sadly, I was under time pressure because it was a school assignment.
about the grimaces: I thought it would be fun to add a little "bonus" section. something different, exaggerated... but maybe it's wrong here.

anyway, I'm very happy about the positive review, feedback means a lot to me :)

:thanks:
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ChrisTheJeweler Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010  Professional General Artist
I agree about the grimace faces... but I love the rest of the project... reminds me of the TV show Lie to Me
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